which sentence most effectively helps readers envision a scene

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This scene is the one that shows the most potential to be a reality. In this scene, the character is in her house, and the scene begins with her getting in her car and driving off. Everything seems fine, and nothing can possibly go wrong. The scene ends, and her car is parked in her driveway.

This scene is a perfect example of the first sentence. The second sentence is true, but the third sentence says, “Everything seems fine, and nothing can possibly go wrong.

The first sentence is a perfect example of the second sentence. The second sentence is true, but the third sentence says it’s a perfect example of everything being fine, and nothing can possibly go wrong.

The first sentence of the third paragraph is a perfect example of the second sentence of the third paragraph. The second sentence is true, but the third sentence says its a perfect example of everything being fine, and nothing can possibly go wrong.

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In a sense, this is a very common problem with all kinds of storytelling. The first sentence of the third paragraph is a perfect example of the second sentence of the third paragraph. The second sentence is true, but the third sentence says its a perfect example of everything being fine, and nothing can possibly go wrong.

The second sentence has a bit of a problem. It says it’s perfect because it says it’s fine. So it’s literally saying, “It’s fine that this didn’t happen, because everything else that I’ve just said is also fine.” But something else could have potentially gone wrong in the story and caused the reader to feel that it was okay. So it’s basically saying that it wasn’t fine, but that it was fine.

I know this one is technically the third sentence but I like it better because it sounds as if it is saying that everything is fine, and nothing can possibly go wrong.

This is a bit of a tricky one. The way I have it written, it’s saying that everything is fine, and nothing can go wrong. This is true as long as we don’t know about the future. Which is what makes it tricky to put into a tweet. Twitter would probably frown if I didn’t use the phrase “as long as we don’t know the future”, but I like it because there’s no way the readers wouldn’t understand it.

I was just thinking about this. Twitter seems to be a bit of a problem for me. I usually write long tweets, but I often feel like people just don’t read them. So I think it would help if I had this sentence: “The world is a scary place, and nobody knows what is coming. Everyone is scared, and scared is not a nice thing to be.” I think this sentence would be much more readable and therefore more likely to get retweeted.

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