which of the following sentences can be revised to eliminate redundancies?

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The following sentences are self-explanatory.

The following sentences are self-explanatory.

The following sentences are self-explanatory.

These are the two sentences we’ve been working with for quite a while. We’d like to be able to revise them to eliminate redundancies, and we’ve found two ways to do that without rewriting the whole sentences.

The two sentences weve been working with for quite a while. Wed like to be able to revise them to eliminate redundancies, and weve found two ways to do that without rewriting the whole sentences.

The first revision is to change “the island” to “the party island.” This should eliminate the three sentences. The second revision is to remove “Visions” from the middle. This will eliminate the rest of the sentences.

The second revision is to remove the word’senses’ from the middle. The third revision is to add the word’stages.’ This should eliminate the rest of the sentence.

The first revision eliminates two sentence. The second revision eliminates two sentence. The third revision eliminates two sentence.

As it turns out, the first revision eliminates one sentence and the second removes two. The third revision removes one sentence and the second removes three.

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